Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Business System second draft ( final for assignment will be redone)

Here is the second draft of my business system.  For the presentation I am going to tweak the little things that the class had commented on when I presented it for the assignment. For example:
- color yellow needs to be a pure yellow
- Some of the jagedness of the type in the "newsletter" are hard to read, need to be more formatted, and entered in my standards manual
- the sparkle by the apple should be by all of the photos. 
-  Print things double sided as apposed to attaching them together 
- Make info on business card bigger, and card a bit smaller
- Make the inside where the product is displayed bigger, and more professional looking


1 comment:

Angela Wang said...

Good compilation of comments – I'm not sure about double siding the mailer cards with information, but maybe use visuals to spice up the other side a bit. Having them hinge is nice, just felt a little cramped at the size it was, which could be easily fixed.